http://rabidchild.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rabidchild.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] whitecollarhc2011-11-14 02:24 pm

Fic: A Hole in the World

Title: A Hole in the World
Rating: R for violence
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Elizabeth, Neal, Diana; gen
Spoilers: None
Content Notice: Amnesia!fic.
Word Count: ~22,800
Summary: Peter is missing and presumed dead after a dangerous undercover assignment goes wrong. Somewhere in Pennsylvania, a man wakes up without his memories. Somewhere in New York, a wife and best friend won’t give up hope.

Peter’s only thought in that moment was for Elizabeth; he couldn’t bear the thought of her grieving for him. I’m sorry, hon was his last thought as he fell into darkness.

[identity profile] squeakyoflight.livejournal.com 2012-01-26 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
I loved this fic.

I am always completely in awe when a writer can keep a character with no memory so totally in character, and your Peter was spot-on from start to finish. I loved how Neal was there for El, and how the team never gave up their search. A very satisfying fic.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Squeaky