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Welcome to our first Comment Fic Fest!

With the BIG CLIFFHANGER in the season 3.0 finale, we thought a good topic for our first ‘fest would be: KIDNAPPING!

Does Moz think he’s been abducted by aliens? Almost certainly.

Did Neal have some post traumatic stress after being kidnapped by Ryan Wilkes in “Front Man?”

Or maybe Peter has El “abducted” by Diana and Neal in advance of her surprise birthday party?

Or just…Neal/Peter being held by Bad Guys Unknown results in sweet, sweet lovin’.Or something.

The possibilities are endless.
 

Rules:
(ganked from [livejournal.com profile] ariadnes_string’s Running Hot Fever Meme, and I hope she doesn’t mind…)

1. Prompts should have kidnapping or abduction as an element – you can request any or all aspects of this scenario from planning to aftermath. Other than that, be as inventive as you like about the different cases. Any and all pairings and ratings allowed. No RPF/RPS though, please.

2. One comment per prompt, please. Comment to this post with your prompt, characters or pairings and other preferences. All genres/pairings are welcome. Crossovers welcome. You can also state your desired rating and content, though you don't have to. However, some people like non-con with their kidnappings, some people don’t, so it may be a good idea to state what you don’t want right up front.

Example A:
“Elizabeth, Keller. Tag to “Countdown”

El escapes from Keller’s clutches on her own – how did she do it? Maybe she seduced him? Maybe she beat the crap out of him with her ninja-like skills? No rape, please. Any rating.”

Example B:
“Neal/Peter. Potential triggers in prompt!

Aftermath of a fuck or die situation where Peter is a white hot ball of rage. How does it affect his relationships? How do they get him the help he needs? Any rating – be as explicit as you like.”

3. PLEASE WARN FOR TRIGGERY CONTENT. Given the subject matter, there may be any number of triggers in a prompt or a fill, so be thoughtful and warn for them, if you please.

4. We understand that not all of us are writers – you can leave as many prompts as you like even if you can’t fill one, but one prompt per comment, please. If you've got a few, do a separate comment for each separately.

5. Your prompts can be as short or as detailed as you’d like.

6. Scroll through the comments and when/if you find a prompt you like, write a fic in reply to the comment.

7. More than one fill to a prompt is totally acceptable, and is, in fact, encouraged. The more fic, the better! Don’t feel you can’t write to a prompt if someone has also specified that they plan on it – the more the merrier.

8. When filling a prompt with your comment-fic, put ‘FILLED’ in your subject line and then anything else you want, i.e.: a title if you have one/part numbers/rating/warnings. It helps with compiling the master list.

9. When filling, feel free to post to your own journal and post a link here. We know how frustrating the 4300 character limit can be, believe us!

10. Anonymous posting is enabled, but we will delete anything rude or disrespectful of authors, characters or prompts.

11. NO SPOILERS for unaired episodes, please. Given that we’ve just concluded season 3.0, we’re assuming everyone’s seen it by now, however.

12. NO CHARACTER BASHING. Or rudeness in general. What would your mother think?

13. Do feed your authors by telling them how much you like their stuff! They’re awesome.


FAQ:

* Yes, if your fic gets too long for a comment-fic, you can comment with the link to it at your LJ.

* As for a timeframe - this post will be open for prompting for as long as you peeps like. We’ll have additional ‘fests coming later in the year – let’s hope our first one is a success. In any case, it will stay open indefinitely for new comment-fics and comments/feedback.

* If you would be so kind as to pimp this on your own LJ’s, we’d be much obliged!

Any other questions? Feel free to PM me or comment on this entry.
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Diana, more than they bargained for!

Date: 2011-08-18 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silver-falcon24.livejournal.com
A case leads the team into deep water and Diana is taken hostage in the melee. What the kidnappers think is their get out of jail free card turns into their asses being handed to them. Diana being awesome please. Any rating.

Id love for the team to have to rescue her in the end, but that doesn't mean Diana's in distress either. She's got the situation handled, she just hasn't got away yet.

Neal - abducted mid-phone call with Peter

Date: 2011-08-18 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virgo-79.livejournal.com
I know, I know they already did this on the show in "Front Man." It's also been done in "Taken" and "Eye for an Eye"(okay, the latter was a murder, not a kidnapping, but still.) but it remains one of those things that gets to me, because I think it would be absolutely terrifying to be the person on the other end of that call.

Neal & Peter are having a conversation, and in the midst of it, Peter hears Neal being abducted. Unlike "Front Man," there isn't just sudden silence on the line -- Neal doesn't go quietly. What happens after that is entirely up to the author, though it would be lovely if it included BAMF Peter.

Re: Trapped in a coffin! Neal/Peter/El

Date: 2011-08-18 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virgo-79.livejournal.com
O_o

Fic memes are eating my life. That is all.
From: [identity profile] virgo-79.livejournal.com
Neal's been missing a few days, and then, abruptly, he isn't. Peter and Elizabeth find him in decidedly not good shape somewhere on their property (I said doorstep, but if ya like the backyard better, then God be with you.)Peter is equal parts relieved, horrified, and enraged. Aaaaand go.

(Side note: I think this actually crawled out of the place in my brain that "Last House on the Left" made its mark on. Ever watch a movie you really really really wish you could unwatch?)
From: [identity profile] ultracape.livejournal.com
Warden Haskill, in order to redeem himself, designs what he considers an escape proof prison cell, with benefits to force the prisoner to try and escape. He arranges with higher echelons, including Hughes and Bankcroft to test the security of the cell on Neal, not telling them of the extreme effects of the extras and the dire psychological effects it will have on Neal. Of course, no one tells Neal what he's been volunteered to do. Neal is drugged, kidnapped and left in the cell. When he awakens, he's in an orange jumpsuit. He's given either too much or too little food and water at irregular intervals to mess with his circadian rhythms. Loud weird sounds waken him whenever he falls asleep. Temperature levels go from freezing to sweltering and all levels in between. At first Neal decides to just wait out whatever is happening but then the torture begins and he tries everything he can to escape but he's basically in a steal box. There is no way out. As the torture takes effect and with no human contact, Neal becomes delusional and thinks that Peter put him back in prison, he's never left prison and his life with the F.B.I. was a dream, he's been abducted by aliens, he's been kidnapped.

Meanwhile, Peter is waiting in the office for Neal and just when he should be coming in, he's told by Hughes what has happened and that he can observe Neal on his laptop. Only the video feed that the F.B.I. sees is edited to make it look like Neal is in a cell and they don't understand what seems to be making Neal go crazy.

Peter is furious. He with El, Sara, Sally and Mozzie's help piece together what is happening behind the F.B.I.'s back and set about to rescue Neal who is quickly losing touch with reality.

Please, a lot of comfort and focus on how Neal recovers from the trauma.
Edited Date: 2011-08-18 04:25 am (UTC)

Prompt: Peter finds the Trilby

Date: 2011-08-18 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
Funnily enough, I'm currently writing a kidnapping story. :o) Doesn't go with any of these prompts, though.

Here's a prompt from me:

Peter finds Neal's favorite gray Trilby near a dumpster, carelessly discarded. Peter has a feeling something is wrong, but can't be sure. Neal's tracking data leads to the Manhattan docks where there is no sign of him. Peter isn't sure whether Neal ran or not. (Up to here that's pretty much a drabble I wrote, called "Hidden Message" (http://tj-teejay.livejournal.com/83086.html).) Turns out Neal's been kidnapped. The team uncover a few clues, but it's slow going. By the time they find Neal, he's been roughed up a bit (or more than a bit). Bonus points for lots of h/c from Peter and/or El. (Gen please.)
Edited Date: 2011-08-18 06:07 am (UTC)

Fill: At Midnight in some flaming town

Date: 2011-08-18 11:06 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
The first thing Neal is aware of is that he's cold.

It's not caught in the wind type of cold, but rather this deep-seated chill that seems to be coming at him from all sides. That and dirt. He can smell dirt, freshly dug and moist and the two sensations weigh on his befuddled mind and drag him towards consciousness. Except it doesn’t feel like waking up because when he opens his eyes it’s still dark and it still feels like he's clawing his way out from some sucking black hole. It takes him a few precious debilitating moments for him to realise he is awake and no, he can’t see.

And he can barely move, either.

There are walls either side of him, eerily white in the darkness and silken under his fingers. The sensation runs through him like a freight train. He reaches out in front of him, feeling for the roof with both hands except he can’t lift his right arm any higher than his body and there’s not much room beyond that anyway. His left arm is barely half way before he touches it. There’s not even any room to twist and shift sideways and once again his body protests. He knows he’s hurt and that’s worrying in itself. He knows the pain is muted now and there’s only so much time before it makes itself known properly and then he’ll really pay. But he can’t focus on that now. There’s just not enough space for comprehension and the tingling sense of panic starting to creep up his spine.

He's in a box and his shoulders touch on either side and there's a pillow under his neck, canting his head forward in just the right angle. He's cold and he can smell fresh dirt and when he croaks out a cry for help he knows it’s useless because he's not at all stupid. He's in a coffin and he's buried alive and all of a sudden four and a half years in a six by eight cell is nothing on this.

He can’t move, can’t shift an inch either side and it doesn’t help the longer he's awake the more aware he becomes of his own body. His fingers themselves are cold and his chest is tight and tender down the left side. The dull throb already starting to pound, ever so slightly. It’s materializing a little bolder in his shoulder as well and as he panics, drawing air in quickly he can feel his chest constrict and he knows he wont last very long if he cant calm himself down. But thinking is far easier than doing and Neal chokes in another breath and pushes forward, pressing against the roof of the coffin, he cries out as his shoulder gives a sharp protest and his own broken voice echoes back at him in the numbing silence of his own early grave.

“Help! Help me!”
From: [identity profile] neontiger55.livejournal.com
Ooh, yeah this one is pulling at me. Will have a go if RL allows.
From: [identity profile] doctor-fangeek.livejournal.com
I'm glad someone might be picking this one up! I love it!! If I were better at plot (and had more time right now - school starts in 11 days, I'm going to NYC with mom this weekend, and I'm working on two other stories), I might try it myself.
Edited Date: 2011-08-18 01:09 pm (UTC)

Peter/Neal - Forced to F**k

Date: 2011-08-18 02:00 pm (UTC)
elrhiarhodan: (S3 Promo - Peter - Neal (BW))
From: [personal profile] elrhiarhodan
I know it's such a hackneyed trope, but I love it anyway.

Peter and Neal are taken hostage - how or why is really unimportant - and the bad guys want to see the have sex. Bonus points for Peter not wanting to traumatize Neal (worried about his prison past) and Neal ashamed at how stimulated he is by the thought of Peter finally taking him.

Okay - so this is an excuse for porn.

Triggery Request!

Date: 2011-08-18 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeethyme4me.livejournal.com
TRIGGERY PROMPT (more like a detailed request)!

Peter is Neal's brutal but loving Dom. Peter gets abducted by people who then rape and torture him. Neal, Peter's adoring submissive and servant who would die for him, saves Peter and nurses him back to health, never once leaving his own subspace.

(I realize this has the potential to be EPIC, so if no one wants to take it on, I'll totally understand, but I'd LOVE it, and I thank you ahead of time!!!)

Date: 2011-08-18 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robingal1.livejournal.com
As a prompt, I would like to see Neal swimming away/towards a dangerous situation. This trope would be excellent for that. Swimming until he is physically exhausted and still he keeps going. Maybe Peter is held in a boat that is constantly sinking deeper into the sea? Or Jones is concussed and Neal has to get him to shore? But swimming. Physical exhaustion and swimming.
Would NOT like: no pneumonia, please.
Would like: a bit of humor. Something like, midway through the rescue, a jellyfish or some other painful and annoying sea critter makes Neal's day/night just that much worse.
Anything with June is love!


"Under the Radar" AU

Date: 2011-08-18 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] virgo-79.livejournal.com
Oh my lord, I have so much other stuff I should be doing right now. This'll be the last one I post for a bit, I promise.

This one's been in my head for a while. I always found it ripe for possibility that Adler drugged Neal and Peter with (presumably) the same eyeballed dose of whatever crap he gave them, considering Peter is the big strapping piece of man he is, and Neal is the little slip of a thing he is. It doesn't seem like that would turn out well for Neal. So I'd like a story where it doesn't. Peter comes out of that dosing okay, but Neal ends up dangerously sick, while Adler's holding them.

Angry!Neal, following "Countdown"

Date: 2011-08-18 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladydragoness.livejournal.com
(I hope I do this right.)
Elizabeth is back home, safe, unharmed. Keller got away.... They think. Neal is sick and tired of Keller coming back into his life and screwing things around. So he takes matters into his own hands -literally-, punishing Keller himself. Bonus if he makes Keller cry without making him bleed.

No descriptive slash, implied if fine. Don't kill him, just make him hurt.

Neal's comfort... Is it beating up Keller, or is it after Peter arrests Keller?

Have fun!

Kidnapped Peter, Suspect Neal

Date: 2011-08-18 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiddler-on-roof.livejournal.com
I'm looking for Peter being kidnapped and Neal having to pretend that he is siding with the bad guys in order to keep Peter alive/rescue him. Peter does not know that Neal is on his side and is confused and doubting himself and Neal. Neal saves Peter and they resolve the distrust and there is love all around. The love can be gen partner stuff or slashy goodness. Any rating is good I have no squicks except for kids being hurt and if the boys are together El is not being cheated on. The goal is to hurt the boys emotionally and Peter physically(just don't kill them please)

Naked Neal, porn prompt, het

Date: 2011-08-18 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladydragoness.livejournal.com
Neal wakes up but can't open his eyes... He's blindfolded and tied down to a bed. Naked. Nothing feels, sounds, or smells familiar. It doesn't take him long to learn that his captor is a woman. She has specific intentions for him, namely trying to create a Neal-shaped impression in the mattress. When she's done, he hears a very familiar voice whisper in his ear.

Pick anyone; Alex, Sara, El, some random other character.

A bit of torture and denial is good. Throw in a little kink if you like.

Hmmm First time prompting in this fandom

Date: 2011-08-19 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pennies-4-eyes.livejournal.com
How about something in the way of an impromptu kidnapping rather than something planned out.

Peter's team arranges a sting during a case involving a completely and utterly NON-violent perp. This perp goes way out of his way to avoid the opportunity for violence of any kind during his crimes. So they're not expecting trouble and Neal goes in thinking, for once, that he'll NOT have a gun waved in his face. Only there's someone else there WITH the perp who IS violent and when Neal's cover is blown he's suddenly kidnapped--taken hostage to get passed the FBI waiting outside.

No Death-fic please. And extra bonus Love for Moz working magic outside of Peter's knowledge to help get Neal home safe. Season 3 setting would be grand, but I'm not too picky.

Oh, and Peter/Neal is wonderful...as is Moz/Neal (there's not enough of that)! And gen is fine too, but no peter/el/neal please.
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